I agree with Dan - there is lots to be said that can't be represented graphically. In regard to the menu, what I could do is do up a second version that we can have that has the 'people/themes' or 'people/settings' so we can indicate that we are thinking about that way of doing it as well. I think the organization will depend on just how much evidence we can find for links among the various people/organizations/settings. I didn't do a separate graphic for an entry page simply because that seems more of a purely aesthetic decision which can probably be made later; in regard to the home page - didn't we decide that we would have that essentially in the same format as the rest of the pages? For the writing style, we can talk about our concept of the two boxes and how that combines the pyramid style of writing (within the left frame) and the heading-based approach (with the left frame essentially acting as headings for material in the right frame). Let's just keep adding any more thoughts we have on here and hopefully we'll have enough to make a go of it on Monday.