Melrose Page

Hi guys,

Just adding my thoughts on the Melrose page to complete my critique from last night.

Taryn - I agree with everything you've posted.

Dan - I would vote for your new title. Also, I never heard back from you about helping with compiling the list of images that John wanted today. Can I assume that you've got it taken care of?

And now, without further ado:


MELROSE PAGE:

First paragraph - should be a comma after "Company of Adventurers of England"

Right window of Melrose's contract - his name is missing the T in the title introducing the transcription

In "The Journey to Canada" it says that the Melroses "eventually made land". Shouldn't this be "landfall"?

Near the beginning of "Life at Craigflower" there is an unnecessary period after the link to Peter Bartleman.


That's it!!! We definitely have the most awesome website ever.